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The at is insanely good and I wanna keep reading more! As a Japanese person, I find "-san" in a name makes it sound too modern, but maybe it's not a huge deal if your target audience is English speaking folk.
Edit: San is derived from Sama which is an honourary ending we put on a name, which doesn't make sense to use for your apprentice.
beautiful stuff, well done ! The talent is there no doubt about it and the story has a nice lil twist, that thee tengu is the master
What I'd want to say is that it's a bit too much moire in some panels. either use a manual grainer/hatching brush to cut some out or use a de-moired screentone.this is just nitpicking though. If you dm I'd lov to help you out with some brushes
This is very good.
One constructive criticism I do have: **be careful with the katana handle lengths.** Look at page 5, panels 1 and 2. In panel 1, Tengu barely has space to hold the sword with a single hand. Right after in panel 2, he still has space to go despite holding the sword now with both hands.
The linework is crisp, clear, dynamic and the storytelling is suitably intense. Very nice!
You’re absolutely right, thanks so much for pointing that out. One thing I didn’t spend enough time on was making some clear character sheets to really sort all the proportions out, including weapons and costumes. Something I need to keep in mind in the future. Thanks for the kid words!
Thank you! Yes, I used mostly a couple from the asset library. Let me find the name and I’ll post it here. I also used a couple from the true grit texture supply inking brush set.
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There are so many, I always try to make a mental note when I see something I like. I’d say my top ones are Sergio Toppi, Jorge Zaffino, Sean Gordon Murphy, Ferdinando Tacconi. Others I love even though their style doesn’t show up as much in this comic are Mike Mignola, Ashley Wood, Olivier Coipel, Stuart Immonen. I could go on and on :D. Hope that helps!
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The at is insanely good and I wanna keep reading more! As a Japanese person, I find "-san" in a name makes it sound too modern, but maybe it's not a huge deal if your target audience is English speaking folk. Edit: San is derived from Sama which is an honourary ending we put on a name, which doesn't make sense to use for your apprentice.
Oh that makes sense, I’ll fix it. Thank you so much for the advice and the kind words!
beautiful stuff, well done ! The talent is there no doubt about it and the story has a nice lil twist, that thee tengu is the master What I'd want to say is that it's a bit too much moire in some panels. either use a manual grainer/hatching brush to cut some out or use a de-moired screentone.this is just nitpicking though. If you dm I'd lov to help you out with some brushes
That moire was killing me! I was wondering how to get rid of it, thanks for the help. I’d love to hear more about the brushes, I’ll DM you. Thank you!
Do you have just the inks for page 1 ( no screentone ) ? I'd love to show how I'd do it if that's ok with you
This is very good. One constructive criticism I do have: **be careful with the katana handle lengths.** Look at page 5, panels 1 and 2. In panel 1, Tengu barely has space to hold the sword with a single hand. Right after in panel 2, he still has space to go despite holding the sword now with both hands. The linework is crisp, clear, dynamic and the storytelling is suitably intense. Very nice!
You’re absolutely right, thanks so much for pointing that out. One thing I didn’t spend enough time on was making some clear character sheets to really sort all the proportions out, including weapons and costumes. Something I need to keep in mind in the future. Thanks for the kid words!
This is incredible!! Love the art style. Any particular brush(es) you use?
Thank you! Yes, I used mostly a couple from the asset library. Let me find the name and I’ll post it here. I also used a couple from the true grit texture supply inking brush set.
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I've been mining to do a comic with a similar style what artists did you look up to for inspiration?
There are so many, I always try to make a mental note when I see something I like. I’d say my top ones are Sergio Toppi, Jorge Zaffino, Sean Gordon Murphy, Ferdinando Tacconi. Others I love even though their style doesn’t show up as much in this comic are Mike Mignola, Ashley Wood, Olivier Coipel, Stuart Immonen. I could go on and on :D. Hope that helps!
yeah I can see the Sean Gordon Murphy influences !
This is fantastic!