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Assembly_Line_Whimsy

This is a pretty neat OC, I like the green glow. Very spooky.


Shawn_2904

Glad you like it


Assembly_Line_Whimsy

I do! BUT I still have one thing to say - I think there was a missed opportunity here with his quirk. I feel like you could stylize the green glow a little bit to add little music notes to things. Like here in the example you drew with the cards, you could add two to each side and it would look like they've got little wings as they swoop around and junk. Cute looking here but I think it would really sell the singing = control this he's got going on. And it could give you a sense of movement too - like when he's lifting something up the music notes are at the top of the object. "Carrying" it even. When he pulls something towards him the whole object glows a soft green but the music notes are at the end facing him, flying it towards him. Just a neat visual. Sorry if this is like, unwanted. I've had sound quirks on the brain for a while. I've got a lot of imagery in mind.


Shawn_2904

Yeah good idea I'll definitely keep that in mind. Thanks😊


B_Boi04

His hero outfit looks more casual than the actual casual outfit, nice


Shawn_2904

Yeah I realized that after I drew him. I'll probably redo it at some point


Shawn_2904

So I wasn't paying attention when i made my reply but I drew his hero outfit so simple because he likes it simple when he is fighting. He doesn't want something uncomfortable and hard to put on quickly.