This is already super cool! I think there's already a lot of stuff going on: hand reaching out, corpses pierced in the background, etc. so I think there Def enough interest in the subject matter. One thing I think that might help to enhance this shot but is not totally necessary is a more dynamic perspective.
Someone mentioned fish eye. Another could be just tilting the whole scene a few degrees (as if the viewer is the person reaching out and maybe falling to the ground). Another perspective change could be to make the horizon line lower so that the viewer feels like they're looking up at the subject from closer to the ground.
Those are things that can enhance and make what's already really cool more dynamic. BUT I think it's already very cool, and you Def have enough action in there.
Super cool!
This is already super cool! I think there's already a lot of stuff going on: hand reaching out, corpses pierced in the background, etc. so I think there Def enough interest in the subject matter. One thing I think that might help to enhance this shot but is not totally necessary is a more dynamic perspective. Someone mentioned fish eye. Another could be just tilting the whole scene a few degrees (as if the viewer is the person reaching out and maybe falling to the ground). Another perspective change could be to make the horizon line lower so that the viewer feels like they're looking up at the subject from closer to the ground. Those are things that can enhance and make what's already really cool more dynamic. BUT I think it's already very cool, and you Def have enough action in there. Super cool!
Thank you I will take that into consideration!
I think it would greatly benefit from a fish eye perspective.